How to Pace Your Film — Examples of Good and Bad Pacing in Editing, Writing and More

Brief Summary

This video explores the concept of pacing in film, defining it as the speed at which a story is told and how it affects the audience's experience. It examines how pacing is manipulated in screenwriting through techniques like varying dialogue speed and scene length. The video also covers how directors and cinematographers influence pacing on set using camera techniques, shot duration, and actor performances. Finally, it discusses the role of editing and music in post-production to control the tempo of a film.

  • Pacing is the speed at which a story is told, varying to engage the audience.
  • Screenwriters control pacing through dialogue, action lines, and scene length.
  • Directors influence pacing on set with camera movement, shot duration, and actor direction.
  • Editors adjust pacing in post-production through cutting speed and music.

Introduction to Pacing in Film

The video introduces the concept of pacing in film, posing questions about whether a story feels too fast or too slow at certain points. It highlights pacing as a challenging aspect of storytelling and aims to define what pacing means and how filmmakers approach it. The video promises to explore how story tempo can be manipulated during production and post-production.

What is Pacing in Film?

Pacing in narratives is defined as the speed at which a story unfolds, with most stories varying their pace rather than maintaining a constant speed. Drawing from Robert McKee's analogy, the video likens pacing to a long-distance runner who alternates between speeds to conserve energy and reach their limit. The video notes the evolution of pacing in film history, from early cinema's long takes and faster-paced stories to the complex narrative structures enabled by advanced editing techniques. It also mentions D.W. Griffith's pioneering use of cross-cutting and Alfred Hitchcock's use of pacing to build suspense. Pacing applies to individual scenes, larger sequences, and the entire narrative.

Chapter 1: Pacing In Screenwriting

The screenplay is where the pace of a story is initially established. Screenwriters can dictate the desired speed through various methods. Todd Field's screenplay for 'Tar' includes a disclaimer about the film's tempo changes. The screenplay for 'A Quiet Place' uses short bursts of action, ellipses, and line breaks to build tension. 'Past Lives' employs a steady, meditative pace, with Celine Song using character direction to extend pauses between lines. Aaron Sorkin omits action lines to create a dialogue-driven rhythm. The Safdie brothers' scripts for films like 'Uncut Gems' use scene headings and character management to create a breakneck pace, with characters engaged in multiple conversations simultaneously. Scene length also affects narrative tempo, as demonstrated in 'Requiem for a Dream,' where short, fragmented scenes reflect the characters' spiraling lives.

Chapter 2: Pacing On Set

Pacing can be further refined on set through collaboration between the director, actors, and cinematographer. Using only one or two shots to cover a scene can slow the narrative's tempo, as seen in the work of Apichatpong Weerasethakul, who uses long takes to create a meditative quality. Conversely, a single take can also create a rapid pace, as in 'Children of Men,' where Alfonso Cuaron uses a handheld camera and constant movement to highlight the chaos of the battlefield. Camera movement, including crash zooms and whip pans in 'Kill Bill' or the largely static shots of Yasujiro Ozu, also affects a film's tempo. Even slow camera movements, like the sedate dolly shots in Andrei Tarkovsky's 'Stalker,' can influence pacing. Actors' performances also play a role, with slow delivery conveying inner emotion, as demonstrated by Frances McDormand in 'Nomadland,' or dramatic pauses used for comedy, as seen in 'The Grand Budapest Hotel.'

Chapter 3: Pacing In Post

The narrative speed established on set is finalized during post-production. Editing is crucial to pacing, with the duration of shots and scenes directly affecting the story's speed. Fast cuts increase tempo, as seen in Baz Luhrmann's films, while Chantal Ackerman uses cuts sparingly to allow viewers to sink into the world of the film. Most films fall between these extremes, like 'The Hurt Locker,' which starts with leisurely cuts and transitions to quick cuts during chaotic moments. 'Platoon' does the opposite, beginning with frequent cuts and slowing down with slow-motion shots to increase drama. Montages, like in 'The Rules of Attraction,' use rapid editing and narration to create a fast pace, while others, like in 'The Wolf of Wall Street,' use fewer cuts but convey more narrative information. Music also significantly impacts pacing, with John Williams's score for 'Jaws' and Hans Zimmer's score for 'Dunkirk' using tempo and sound to build suspense and urgency. The editing room is where all pacing elements converge and are adjusted as needed.

Takeaways

Pacing is an essential element in storytelling, particularly in cinema, and should be considered throughout the filmmaking process. It begins at a film's inception and can be set in the script, storyboard, and shot list, utilizing pre-production software to design the most efficient approach.

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0:01 Does a portion of a story ever feel like it is moving too quickly? Or too slowly? One of the most difficult aspects of storytelling is pacing. But what exactly does pacing mean? And how do filmmakers approach it? This is What Is Pacing? Let's slow down to remind you to subscribe to StudioBinder and turn on notifications to stay updated on all our videos. We will be spoiling the following movies. Now, back to our regular scheduled pacing. Pacing in narratives refers to the speed at which a story is told.

0:48 Most stories do not move at a single pace. As screenwriting expert Robert McKee writes, we coach the audience to move like a long-distance runner. Who, rather than loping at a constant pace, speeds, slows, then speeds again, creating cycles that allow him to reach the limit of his reserves. Pacing in film has evolved over the medium's history. Early cinema often utilized long takes but featured shorter runtimes. Resulting in slower editing but faster-paced stories. With the inception of more advanced editing techniques came more complex and varied narrative structures.

1:33 D. W. Griffith pioneered cross-cutting using pacing to affect the audience's emotions. Later, directors like Alfred Hitchcock used pacing to exacerbate suspense and shock. Today, pacing remains a primary consideration for all filmmakers. - Must go faster. - Hey, slow down. Safety first. - Pacing can apply to both the micro and macro aspects of storytelling. Individual scenes have their own pacing. But you should also consider the pacing of larger sequences and the entire narrative as a whole. We'll look at the various ways story tempo can be manipulated including

2:20 during production and post-production. But first, let's look at pacing in screenwriting. - Read. - The screenplay is the first place where the pace of a story can be dictated. There are several ways a screenwriter can signal the speed they want their story to be told. In his screenplay for 'Tar', Todd Field explicitly states his vision for the tempo with an opening disclaimer. Writing, 'Based on this script's page count, it would be reasonable to assume that the total running time for 'TAR' will be well under two hours. However, this will not be a reasonable film.

3:06 There will be tempo changes. The screenplay for 'A Quiet Place' has action in short bursts broken up by ellipses and line breaks building tension and emphasizing scares.

3:52 'Past Lives', meanwhile, moves at a steady meditative pace, letting small moments breathe. Writer and director Celine Song also uses character direction to pace a dialogue. Her lengthy bits of direction give an actor a keen sense of how to play the moment and extend the pause between the character's lines. In this scene, she writes, they just look at each other for a moment. Hae Sung has so much to say and he would articulate something if he wasn't all too young.

4:48 Compare this with a rapid-fire dialogue from a writer like Aaron Sorkin. - You got a 1,600? - Yes. I could sing in an acapella group, but I can't sing. - Does that mean you actually got nothing wrong? - I could recruit, earn a 25 PC. - Or you get into a final club? - Or I get into a final club. - Sorkin deliberately omits any action lines during most of his exchanges. Letting the dialogue create a rhythm of its own. - Have you ever tried? - I'm trying right now. - To recruit? - To get into a final club. - To row crew? - No. - Are you like, whatever, delusional? - No. - The Safdie brothers have made their name on breakneck pacing. Their scripts, too, hint at the tempo of their stories.

5:35 In the opening scenes of 'Uncut Gems', they introduce us to the chaos of Howard's life. - Arnold! Tell him I'm coming up now. - He ping pongs from location to location. And they indicate just how all over the place he is with their scene headings like 30 minutes later. - I'm literally minutes away from closing the biggest deal of my goddamn life and when I do, you're gonna be embarrassed. - And soon after. - Howard Ratnick, how are you? - What really creates an urgent pace is the Safty's management of characters. - What the f*ck is going on out here? - At any given time, Howard is having multiple conversations with multiple different characters. He and the audience are getting pulled several different ways at once.

6:20 - I have clients in the office. - Turn around and walk away. - All right, David, go back inside. Everything's fine. - Hello? Open the door. Okay. Geez, is it, uh, you're with KJ? - Narrative tempo can also be affected by scene length. Most of the scenes in 'Requiem for a Dream', for example, take up less than a page. These short fragmented scenes are used to reflect the character's lives spiraling out of control. Once the script is written, pacing can be further honed on set.

7:07 During production, a director can dictate a story's speed through collaboration with their actors and cinematographer. Deciding to cover a scene with only one or two shots can often slow the narrative's tempo. Director Apichatpong Weerasethakul is famous for this approach. allowing his scenes to move slowly and deliberately. These long single takes build the dreamlike meditative quality that has become the filmmaker's signature.

7:53 - The world was stunned today by the death of Diego Ricardo, the youngest person on the planet. - A single take can also have a more rapid pace. In 'Children of Men', Alfonso Cuaron uses a one er to highlight the chaos of the battlefield. Because the camera is handheld and nearly constantly moving, it imbues a faster pace to the scene than we are set to call stationary wide. As Cuaron shows, camera movement can affect a film's tempo.

8:42 In 'Kill Bill', Quentin Tarantino uses crash zooms and whip pans to create fast paced fight scenes. Yasujiro Ozu would largely cover his scenes with almost no camera movement. The director's locked-off shots allow scenes to breathe, letting the audience contemplate the subtle dynamics between characters. A camera doesn't need to be still to slow down a scene. In 'Stalker', Andrei Tarkovsky uses a sedate camera dolly to evoke a character's dream state.

10:03 - Of course, actors' performances can also affect the speed of a narrative. - We are in a really big hurry. - Sure. - Actors will often slow down a scene if they want to convey some inner emotion of their character. In this scene from 'Nomadland', Frances McDormand takes her time with a monologue, using moments of silence to show the emotions she wrestles with while recalling these memories. - It's like my dad used to say, what's remembered lives. I maybe spent too much of my life just remembering Bob. - In 'The Grand Budapest Hotel', Ray Fiennes employs a long beat

10:52 or dramatic pause for comedy. - The police are here. They asked for you. - Tell them I'll be right down. - Okay. - Then moments later, he and Tony Revolori speed through their dialogue to ramp up the pace of the scene. - Have you ever been questioned by the authorities? - Yes, on one occasion. - What, what, what? - I was arrested and tortured by the rebel militia after the desert uprising. - Right. Well, you know the drill then. Zip it. - You've never heard the word Van Hoytel in your life. - Got it. - Okay, let's go. - The narrative speed dictated on set will then be crystallized by the pacing in post.

11:48 In many ways, the art of editing is the art of pacing. How long an editor decides to stay on a shot or in a scene has a direct effect on the speed of a story. Fast cuts are the most immediate way to increase the tempo of a sequence. Baz Luhrmann has a particular affinity for this approach. Using speedy editing to give energy to his sequences. Chantal Ackerman, on the other hand, uses cuts more sparingly.

12:34 In her film, 'News From Home', she lingers on shots of New York. Allowing the city to play itself. And for viewers to slowly sink into its world. Most films, however, fall somewhere in between these two extremes. This scene from 'The Hurt Locker' begins with slightly more leisurely cuts. And once a shot is fired, there are several quick cuts underlining the sudden chaos of the sequence.

13:26 This famous sequence from 'Platoon' does the opposite. Beginning with more frequent cuts and then holding on slow-motion shots of Elias. Slowing down the pacing increases the drama and tragedy of Elias's death and makes it all the more excruciating to watch. 'The Rules of Attraction' boasts a four-minute montage of a hedonistic romp through Europe. Both the edit and the propulsive narration makes this an extremely fast-paced sequence.

14:13 - Saw the Tate, saw Big Ben, ate a lot of weird English food. It rained a lot, it was expensive, and I'm jonesing, so I split for Amsterdam. The Dutch all know English, so I didn't have to speak any Dutch, which was a relief. - This montage from 'The Wolf of Wall Street' utilizes fewer cuts, but speeds through more narrative. In just a few minutes, Belfort has taught his team how to sell and upgrades his company. Music can also play a large role in pacing. John Williams's score for 'Jaws' uses pacing to a masterful effect. If we put this scene to slow music there is far less suspense.

15:12 But listening to the actual soundtrack, which speeds up, braces us for a scare. Hans Zimmer's score for Dunkirk makes heavy use of what sounds like a ticking clock, adding an urgent pacing to every scene. Even ones which wouldn't normally feel rushed. The editing room is where all the pieces of pacing come together.

15:58 And if the pacing isn't working, the editing room is where it must be fixed. Pacing is an essential element in any form of storytelling. And so it should come as no surprise that it is vital in cinema. No matter where you are in the filmmaking process, it is always important to keep in mind. Pacing begins at a film's inception. Set the pace in your script. Block out scenes in a storyboard. Design the most efficient shot list, and more, in StudioBinder's pre-production software. That's all for now.

16:45 We hope you get where you're headed. At the pace you see fit.

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